Manuscript Critiques

My work focuses on helping writers move beyond surface-level storytelling into fiction that carries psychological depth and moral weight.

I am a novelist and MFA candidate in Genre Fiction, with training from Oxford University. My work centers on moral imagination, authority, and transformation.

 I’m opening a limited number of spots for first chapter critiques.

If you’re working on a novel and aren’t sure whether your opening is doing what it needs to do, I’ll read up to 20 pages and give you clear, specific feedback.

You’ll receive:

• a written critique focused on clarity, tension, and character

• what’s working and what isn’t landing

• concrete suggestions for revision

Turnaround is one week.

Cost: $150